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The Making of a Printz-Winner
I’ve been locked in my fortress of edit-tude, trying to finish before my trip this week, so I’m kind of saving all my brilliance for that. Heh.
But, in between scenes, I’ve been catching up on blogs from the week, and I ran across the below video blog from one of my absolute faves, made of awesome young adult author John Green.
In it, he discusses the evolution of his Printz-Award-winning debut novel, Looking for Alaska—and how many of the best-loved parts of the book came out in revisions. *After* being accepted by an editor. So interesting!! He also talks about all the ways a ton of people helped give him ideas for the book. Even the title (which is something I’ve been struggling with)!
Makes me feel like I’m on the right track with my own writing—and a little less intimidated as I finish my pre-query revisions.
Maybe I’ve got a Printz-winner on my hands after all!
In the Blogosphere: 8/9-8/13
“In the Blogosphere” is a series, which lists links to writing-related blogs I’ve stumbled upon throughout a given week (usually).
I’m admittedly behind with my Blogosphere posts—I have about 50 links saved, dating all the way back to May/June-ish (oh noes!)—but they are all still worth a look. I’ll catch up eventually, right?
CONFERENCE GOODIES
You know how, when you go to some writers’ conferences, they give you a goodie bag? Well, here are some links that are better than that! Yes, they all are from kids’ lit conferences, but the skills are not just for kids’ lit writers.
Here, get soundbites from tons of industry professionals at the recent SCBWI L.A. conference—courtesy of the fabulous Michelle Schusterman of YA Highway.
In this post, over at Adventures in Children’s Publishing, the inimitable Martina Boone presents us with literary agent Elana Roth’s two cents about high concept (from the SCBWI ME/DE/WV conference).
Also, if you *weren’t* one of the thousands who attended this week’s free online writing conference, WriteOnCon, get out from under your rock and click here to check it out. Most (if not all?) of the posts and vlogs are up there. Such a fab event!
YA YA YA
Here *are* some things specific to YA writers.
This adorable post, by the equally-as-adorable Nathan-Bransford-repped Natalie Whipple teaches you how to Tweet and blog like a YA author. Yes, I am guilty of all these things.
I’ve posted links on this subject before (mostly by Andrea Brown lit agent Mary Kole), but here is Deborah Halverson—The Editor’s—take on swearing in YA lit.
Also, over at his blog—The Book Deal—editor Alan Rinzler shares tips on writing YA from three Dystel & Goderich Literary Management agents, Stacey Glick, Michael Bourret, and Jim McCarthy.
ON KRAFT*
It’s all about the mission, baby. The Storyfixer, Larry Brooks, discusses what makes a successful short story.
In this post at See Heather Write, freelancer/editor Heather Trese uses one of my favorite shows (How I Met Your Mother) to discuss character consistency. Or lack thereof.
And while we’re on the subject of characters, Seth Frederiksen talks about how to make leading characters great at Fuel Your Writing.
As a little precursor to a “Pointers from the Pros” post I will be running soon, here’s The Donald (Donald Maass), over at Writer Unboxed, talking about creating tension.
*In case you missed my D.Maass/RWA10 post earlier this week, here it is. Pimping out her own blog? Why, yes, she is! (And talking about herself in third person, too—what a freak-a-zoid!)
HEHE
I heart these fellow Clevelanders and YA authors, Lisa and Laura Roecker. Here, they talk about how writing novels is a little like peeing your pants.
Oh—and this is why I love YA author John Green:
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*See what I did there?
Shenandoah Writers Hosting a Write-In Saturday, May 15
For any writers in the Harrisonburg, Va., area who are interested, I am hosting a write-in at my humble abode this Saturday, May 15, from 11 A.M. – 5 P.M.
THE GIST
Because this profession has the propensity to be such a solitary one, I find I sometimes need that extra boost that camaraderie provides (hence Shenandoah Writers, Shenandoah Writers Online, SheNoWriMo, etc.). While the act of writing is individual, I think it might be neat to feed off the energy of others. That’s why I think, although I would have done SheNoWriMo myself if I’d had to, I have been staying on top of my word count (for the most part). It makes one accountable.
It has worked for some of my favorite authors (John Green, Maureen Johnson, E. Lockhart), so perhaps it will work for us as well!
I have never been to a write-in or writers’ retreat before, but I envision this as a way to force oneself to get the writing done. We all have crazy things going on in our lives, I’m sure, and we don’t always make as much time to write as we intend – so this is kind of an organized way of taking that time and being accountable to others – butt in chair and WRITE, as they say, the whole time. 
We will each be working on our OWN projects. It will likely be a largely quiet day.
WHAT WE’LL HAVE
We have plenty of comfortable spaces to set up little “Internet cafes” as well as places to get a little bit of distance—no need for anyone to bring card tables or chairs, like we discussed at the meeting. As well, we have outlets all over the place as well as two power strips, so we should be set in terms of power, no matter where people set up camp.
In addition, we recently acquired a 30-cup coffee pot, so we will have plenty of fuel to keep us going!
WHAT TO BRING
- Laptops
- Power cords for your laptops
- Pens/Notebooks if you think you’ll be writing/outlining by hand
- Your favorite writing snacks – we intend to do dinner at 5PM with anyone who wants to go, but if you’d like to snack throughout the day, pack yourself a little somethin’ somethin’
RSVP
Please let me know if you can make it. Even if you’ve never been to a Shenandoah Writers (IRL) meeting, but you’re in the area
and interested, we’d love to have you—I just need to be able to plan for it, so it would be nice if you’d let me know.
As well, if you aren’t sure you can commit to the whole time, that’s totally fine. You can certainly come and go as you please.
Please contact me for directions.
FINALLY
I think it will be a neat experience. And hey—if it doesn’t work out or we hate it or something, that’s okay, too. We’ll find out!
If you have any questions between now and Saturday, please feel free to shoot me an e-mail.
Looking forward to it!
In the Blogosphere: 3/1-3/5
“In the Blogosphere” is a weekly series, which lists links to writing-related blogs I’ve stumbled upon throughout a given week. Most posts will be from that week, but if I find some “oldies but goodies,” I’ll throw those up here as well.
I never find as much time to read blogs as I want, but here are a few posts that struck me this week.
LIVING VICARIOUSLY THROUGH OTHERS
This week has been a positive one, in terms of getting some nibbles and bites on my manuscript. I’m trying very hard to curb my excitement, however, as I know the road to publication is actually more like a jacked-up staircase.
In the interest of keeping positive, let’s live vicariously through three up-and-coming young adult authors:
- Jodi Meadows. Although this happened a few weeks ago, I only found out this week: my new pal, who has been up and down her jacked-up staircase for the past 7 years, signed with Lauren MacLeod of The Strothman Agency (whom Jodi refers to as “agent of awesome”).
- Sarah Wylie. If this post doesn’t warm your heart, you’re dead inside. Wylie, repped by FinePrint Literary‘s Suzie Townsend, announced her debut novel, All These Lives, was just sold at auction and will be out in 2012.
- Steph Bowe. This 16-year-old Aussie is repped by Curtis Brown Ltd.’s Ginger Clark, and her debut novel (working title: These Bones) will be published this September in Australia and New Zealand (Text Publishing) and the summer of 2011 in the U.S. (Egmont USA). She’s also a part of The YA 5, a blog dedicated to changing the way young adult literature is discussed.
**Just a reminder: My guest blog on “leetspeak/text message lingo” in YA will appear on Bowe’s blog Monday, so don’t forget to check it out!
NIT PICKING
Thursday was National Grammar Day, and in the spirit of nitpicking, Curtis Brown Ltd.’s Nathan Bransford blogged about your spelling/grammar pet peeves.
Nerdfighter master and New York Times bestseller John Green adds to the grammar hilarity with this pic.
As well, one of my new favorites, YA author extraordinaire Maureen Johnson critiqued a query letter on the blog of superagent Daphne Unfeasible (her agent Kate Schafer Testerman of kt literary‘s alter ego).
SOME THINGS TO THINK ABOUT
At coffee with Jodi the other day, I brought up the subject of author advances. Being that I didn’t know much about what to expect—I thought the average book deal was wayyyyy less than it actually is—Jodi put me in touch with this post by fantasy author Jim C. Hines. I learned a lot!
Are you one of those Facebookers who changes your status every time something upsets you? You might want to think twice about that after reading this post by Andrea Brown Literary Agency‘s Mary Kole over at Kidlit.com.
Sometimes, dying dramatically or mysteriously is part of the job description when you sign up to be a writer. The folks over at Schmoop.com take a peek at the fascinating deaths of nine famous writers.
STUFF THAT’S PROBABLY GOOD FOR YOU
Not that I can do this, but I can appreciate the idea behind it. Author and webmaster of A Life Less Anxious: Freedom from Panic Attacks and Social Anxiety Without Drugs or Therapy Steve Pavilanis gives some tips on how to function without caffeine.
Editing: Get Distance, Get Advice & Get Over It
When I finished my first manuscript—well, the first time I finished it (heh)—there was one nagging question I had in the back of my mind: is the time span too long?
It started with my protagonist in her sophomore year of college, flashed back through some of high school, and ended up just after her college graduation; so, while the span was technically only two years, it seemed like six or seven because of the flashback.
SEEK HELP
I swapped manuscripts with a few other YA writers—without mentioning my concern about time span. I figured, we’ll see if it slides. For the most part, I received positive feedback, but one woman—the one whose manuscript was the best out of all those I critiqued and the one who, during our swap, landed a literary agent—mentioned she thought I should set the whole thing in high school somehow.
Ugh—I wanted to query—but I knew she was right. So I set out to make it fit within the parameters of my main character’s sophomore through senior years of high school.
NOT SHORT ENOUGH—SHOOT ME, PLEASE
Halfway through the manuscript makeover, I attended the South Carolina Writers’ Workshop and had a critique with Waxman Literary’s fabulous Holly Root. When she said three years is still too long of a time span for young adult lit, although it killed me, I knew she was right. As a friend at that conference put it, “Three years in YA is the equivalent of War and Peace.” So I trudged home, consulted several fellow writers, read several YA books and studied those I’d already read, and even asked YA author Lauren Myracle for some advice.
Myracle reiterated what most people had said, most kids’ books take place over a very short period of time (a few weeks, a semester, a school year at the longest). In addition, she asked if I had more than one arc—because, if I did, I could split the book into two.
GET SOME DISTANCE AND GET OVER IT
During that month of researching and gearing up to edit once more, the biggest thing I had to overcome was wrapping my head around mushing my story from three years into two semesters. I was too close to it at the time, and I just didn’t see how it was possible.
I thought a good deal about what my editor and friend, Chuck Sambuchino of Writer’s Digest Books, had said when he reviewed my pages: there was a lot I could cut—if the reader “gets it” with just one scene, why drag it out and have three similar scenes? He said he often sees this when writers add autobiographical elements to their manuscripts; they want to stay true to “how it happened” and they end up sacrificing story because of it.
So, with some distance from my novel and armed with lots of great advice, I put marker to dry-erase board and plotted out my story. I looked at every scene and evaluated its worth to the overall story. With the fictionalized autobiographical scenes, I let go of the “how it happened”—and in most cases, I eliminated them altogether. It all began to click into place.
SO . . .
It took about a month of revisions, but what I now have is a much tighter, much better, much more marketable story. I ended up changing my focus pretty much completely, playing up my hook, adding/deleting scenes—and it still wound up being 20K words shorter.
I’m not saying this process won’t likely happen all over again when/if a lit agent is interested in it—and then probably again when/if a publisher is interested in it. But the most important lesson here is that, if you’re too attached to the “how it happened,” too in love with your words, and too close to your manuscript, you cannot be an effective editor.
In the below Vlogbrothers video, YA author John Green talks editing. He says he deletes over 90% of his original words and that all the things people like about his books emerge in later drafts. Enjoy!
In the Blogosphere: 1/25-1/29
“In the Blogosphere” is a weekly series, which lists links to writing-related blogs I’ve stumbled upon throughout a given week. Most posts will be from that week, but if I find some “oldies but goodies,” I’ll throw those up here as well.
I never find as much time to read blogs as I want, but here are a few posts that struck me this week.
RESOURCES
Do you love to pick apart grammar the way I do? Writer Magazine‘s Bonnie Trenga analyzes the heck out of “criminal sentences” over at The Sentence Sleuth and gives examples of how to make your sentences shine.
Have a query, but you’re afraid to send it to the Query Shark? Try my new writer pal—and, apparently neighbor—Jodi Meadows‘s Query Project over at her (W)ords and (W)ardances blog. Meadows used to read slush for former lit agent Jenny Rappaport, so she knows a thing or two about queries that work—and she critiques them weekly.
Want to boost that platform? Check out what Writers Web site Planner has to say about what to include.
If you’ve been querying and you don’t know about QueryTracker, get with it! As you await those fateful rejections—I mean, requests for fulls and partials and offers for representation—look up the stats on the agents you’ve queried. Previous queriers’ comments about how long Agents X, Y and Z took to respond can help calm your inner crazy.
And if you’re looking for a little writerly advice, Writer’s Digest‘s Brian A. Klems sets you straight with his Questions and Quandaries blog.
ATTENTION FREELANCERS
For all things freelancing, check out Freelancewriting.com. Fellow freelancer J.M. Lacey suggested this site to me, and I can’t wait to play around in there!
If you’re wondering what you should be charging, check out the Editorial Freelancers Association for recommended rates, and if you’re looking to hire a writer and have an affinity for Canucks, check out what Writers.Ca says you should expect to pay for all sorts of projects.
Another J.M. Lacey recommendation, Media Bistro keeps tabs on writing opportunities as well as publishing news.
IN THE NEWS
I’m sure you probably heard about Catcher in the Rye author—and legend—J.D. Salinger‘s death this week. In The Wall Street Journal, co-author of Nick & Norah’s Infinite Playlist and the upcoming Will Grayson, Will Grayson with John Green and Scholastic editorial director David Levithan pays tribute to the man whose famous work not only embodies the young adult genre, but probably started it as well.
TWEET TWEET
Still not convinced Twitter can help you promote your work? Over on her blog, young adult author Lisa Schroeder weighs in on the Twitter debate and offers tips on how to get the most out of the latest social network.
To punctuate that point, Bit Rebels‘ Diana Adams tells you how to keep your Twitter followers.
When judging my contest entries, I found that merely checking my Twitter replies wasn’t keeping accurate tabs on them all. With a quick search, I discovered Checkretweet. Just type in your Twitter ID, and they handle the rest.
CONTEST
If you’re into YA fiction, check out my Twitter pal and fellow aspiring YA author Stephanie Pellegrin‘s blog for a chance to win a signed copy of Hush, Hush by Becca Fitzpatrick, a Hush, Hush postcard, and a Hush, Hush bookmark.
JUST FOR FUN
Wiley Miller gives us a glimpse of the first writer/editor meeting in his comic Non Sequitur.
ALSO
Check out my interview with agent BJ Robbins of BJ Robbins Literary Agency on the Guide to Literary Agents blog.
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